you fail feminism forever

In This World and the Next Chapter 2

szaleniec1000 Sep 18, 2012 15:18

In which Harry and Hermione establish themselves as two of the most loathsome protagonists in the history of fanfic. And I've read Hogwarts Exposed.

( In This World and the Next Chapter 2 )

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Hogwarts Exposed Chapter 24 part 6

szaleniec1000 Sep 22, 2011 23:49

Remember when I said that Chapter 48 of Deserving was all the worst of the fic in one place? Well, the same is true of Chapter 24 of Hogwarts Exposed, and since Deserving looks like a masterpiece in comparison to HE... yes, this is part 6 and not the final part.

( Hogwarts Exposed Chapter 24, still )

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Hogwarts Exposed Chapter 23 part 1

szaleniec1000 Aug 31, 2011 13:17

Well, here's another chapter.( Read more... )

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Hogwarts Exposed Chapter 14

szaleniec1000 Jun 08, 2011 20:57

Here we go again.

( Hogwarts Exposed Chapter 14 (NSFW) )

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